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TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-01 06:45 PM

         Miss
   For when I look unto thine eyes and ask myself what I miss,
   Your words were that of a poet,
   And for heaven sake your lips!
   Your hand was that of an angel, never cold,
   But most of all I miss your heart, soul, and sweet pasionate kiss...

~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

1 posted 2000-02-01 07:04 PM

Wow...one of your best works...I like it...a little Shakespearian, ne?

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-01 08:09 PM

this is a very sweet poem...I love it,
and hello and welcome to Passions...another talented friend walks in...

Janet Marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-02-02 02:49 PM

This is lovely Tan Angel.
James

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2000-02-02 02:58 PM

Very nice TanAngel...you certainly have a talent for saying so much in so few words....just as before you have proven this again. Well done.

"They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience."
-Gandhi

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Bronx
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

5 posted 2000-02-02 05:38 PM

Wonderful-
I loved the whole shakespear thing goin' on there. Wouldst thou consider teaching me some of that foriegn tongue

snickers

Poetically your
Bronx

Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

kari
Member

since 1999-10-03

Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

6 posted 2000-02-02 05:42 PM

Your words were chosen very well. Good job & welcome!

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

7 posted 2000-02-03 12:02 PM

i like your style ...simple and memningful
i liked friends too ...and with all those questions you asked in it..i am happy to know i am not the only one who ponders... about ...friends..and will they be there...

summer
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

8 posted 2000-02-03 12:56 PM

i liked this poem alot...i agree with one of the other reply not too many words but it held so much thought and emotion...keep up the great work...

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