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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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lost hope |
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lost Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16New York, NY |
screaming, crying, a circle of madness taunting, teasing, voices of sadness i'm slipping and sliding losing my grasp i'm sitting here hoping this feeling will pass but the longer i wait, the further i fall until i feel like i mean nothing at all i long to get out of this nose dive descent but the harder i fight the more i feel spent nothing is hopeless, a glimmer of hope? ugh! how should i end it, razor or rope? |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
oops-it doubled [This message has been edited by danni (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i know this feeling well. great expression. choose not to end it with razor nor rope, but the will to fight and find your happiness. that is the only way it will truly end, as tiring as it may be. to choose the latter is to let it win. hope things get better. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
There is always a glimmer of hope, look for it instead of the rope or dagger. Welcome to the dark forum, hope you have read the rules and understand everything here if not please feel free to email me with any questions. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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lost Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16New York, NY |
actually I have a less bleak line for the ending "maybe some day i'll be able to cope" but I thought the razor & rope was more dramatic |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
For people who struggle with such feelings the war is life long with each day a new battle to be fought and won. You express these feeligns well. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Great- I liked the poem a bunch! we all feel like this. Never give up on youself and never loose hope! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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