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Neala
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0 posted 2000-01-31 07:25 PM


Deception
Evil Ententions
Painful Deseate

Wanting to hurt
The inosent
Inflict pain
Into the weak

Waiting
Watching
Wanting

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2000-02-01 03:44 PM


Nice poem and so true that there are so many illusions and deception in this world.  James
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
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2 posted 2000-02-01 04:02 PM


I love this poem...it's so honest and perfectly discriptive yet in so few words. Great job Neala!  

 "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience."
-Gandhi

~*Angel of Darkness*~



~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

3 posted 2000-02-01 06:20 PM


Neala--

...Wow...uh...that's sad. In many ways. But remember: someone has to protect the innocent.

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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