Dark Poetry #1 |
Rage |
~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
the fire inside my soul blinds me so I cannot see who or what I hurt the fire inside my soul consumes me so I am unfeeling able to be as ruthless as needed the fire within my soul burns itself out. I can now see, I can now feel, no longer blind, nor unfeeling, but sorrowful ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Venus, I love this one too, and can so relate. I love the ending. janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Wow! another great one for ~Venus~ This one was definately one of the better ones. Poetically yours Bronx |
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