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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-01-30 07:14 PM


the fire inside my soul
blinds me
so I cannot see
who or what I hurt

the fire inside my soul
consumes me
so I am unfeeling
able to be as ruthless as needed

the fire within my soul
burns itself out.
I can now see,
I can now feel,
no longer blind, nor unfeeling,
but sorrowful

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-30 09:19 PM


Venus,
I love this one too, and can so relate. I love the ending. janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
2 posted 2000-01-31 06:58 PM


Wow!
another great one for ~Venus~  This one was definately one of the better ones.
Poetically yours
Bronx

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