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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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damn the love. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
standing in the shadows, watching love come and go. cloaked in the darkness, listen to the wind blow. i knew that i loved you, even before we met. it's painted on the window, that sees right through my heart. my love can speak so softly, whispers out your name. feel it in the sunshine, reaching out it's flame. patiently i wait for you, looking past the sky. i long to be in your heart, and show you all my love. mo |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Hey I enjoyed this one. Love has it's funny and painful ways of doing things. Keep writing i look foward to more baerlon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
How sad to watch and wait like this. Don't wait too long hon, for real love may pass you by. (HUGS) Felt the longing in this, and enjoyed it. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
oh i liked this alot...I have felt the same way before...i like the part about loving before we ever met...that is how im feeling now...great poem... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a beautiful touching poem...I love it..."whispers out your name...reaching out its flame"... very romantic...great work. Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thank you all for your comments, they are greatly appreciated. mo. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I want to say...no matter what the pain don't think that you want to hide in the darkness forever...I know it's hard just hang in there |
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