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Desperate Cry |
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Auricom45 Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 19Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A |
Desperate Cry Echo in the night Reaching no flight Desperate cry Endless venture fly Look beyond the tears Look beyond your fears Find the meaning of question No question there is to mention High in the distance, very far It shines bright, as bright as a star So do not cry, hope is there Never look down, feel the air Tears roll down from the cheeks Can't even look, never even speak Breathing deep, wiping the anger Looking back, no surrender That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Despair and hope in the same poem..very good!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
"Breathing deep, whiping the anger Looking back, no surrender" I especially liked the last two lines : ) Nice poem ! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
..."Look beyond the tears Look beyond your fears Find the meaning of question No question there is to mention"... I love this one...beautiful poem, inspirational message. janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Spread your wings and fly hon... Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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