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Dark Poetry #1

This Love Wont Leave Me

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

0 posted 2000-01-27 09:12 PM

This love wont leave me...
I still feel you everyday.
Your in my every waking thought,
Your in my heart to stay.

I've cried a thousand tears...
just as many times-I've called your name.
This love wont leave me,
In my soul you remain.

I know I am supposed to move on-
maybe in time I will.
For now this love wont leave me...
For now ... I love you still.
(always will)

Janet Marie
I miss you baby... I love you,always...

..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
Matchbox20

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

1 posted 2000-01-27 11:08 PM

janet,
i like this one alot. for there is still a woman who pulls hard at my soul. even though i have moved on and found another but that girl is still in my heart. and she will forever remain there.

if she would only set my soul free. anyways great poem and if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, mine is always open.

True beauty is often hidden in darkness...
~Jesse C. Jaymz~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

2 posted 2000-01-28 06:08 AM

This poem manages a great sense of being personel about yourself or for the person reading it

It is an amazing poem well done.

Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-01-28 11:06 AM

Janet Marie this flows so smoothly and I can feel the love you still have in your heart.
I really enjoyed the lines "for now this love won't leave me...for now...I love you still. You made me think about one of mine that is now gone...her love was just an illusion...her love was not real. James

Osiris
Junior Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 20

4 posted 2000-01-28 04:02 PM

felt this

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