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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
damaged goods all the pain that your hands ever created all the scars that your tongue ever seared I buried, one piece of me at a time. I forgot, but not forgave. and now there is more of me forgotten than is left to remember and the unforgiving blackness has eaten me from the inside out |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
damaged goods--i have so many times myself felt the same way... but remember damaged for only a moment. someone is out there waiting to restore you..God has a special way of preparing us for the one you were created for.. keep up the good work.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem hits home for me as well, I have learned that being able to put these emotions down on paper is very theraputic and helps heal the scars...I hope you find the same in your writing. This is a deeply personal and beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Janet Marie |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
pain is a way of saying "don't do that again," and scars are our way of remembering the pain. but focusing on the scars is self-destructive. forgiveness is so important, because hate is a selfish emotion that only hurts you in the end. you write feelings very well. i especially liked the searing tongue and unforgiving blackness as images. Jannel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Pain an ever circling crow from omen waiting to descend on you. Felt this way myself. Well done,good imagery. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
thank you for your comments and in the future I will try to participate more in this forum, I have just been fighting my own personal war and have not been reaching out much...your comments mean much to me |
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