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Dark Poetry #1

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Passnot
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-01-25 08:42 AM

Lost trails purged upon sadness
With great remoreses lessens happiness
And blankets shivering security
Slowly dripping death sincerity

Burns of fear and scorching anxiety
Has no effect on my priority
Home in mind's prisoned heart
Free to be trapped by my own art

If earthy pleasantries give corrupt
Might I die with a single cup
Neverless, Nevermore, Every Giving,
Giving no more.

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

1 posted 2000-01-25 11:09 AM

A good poem to think about

I believe its meaning will change with each reading

And will be held differently by all who read it

good ness

Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-01-25 07:09 PM

This is good...you have a way with words! Interesting poem!

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