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Alone with my Sins
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Alone with my Sins |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Comeing out of the darkness My past shrouded in deep fog Unseen for the most lonely In a world past and forgotten It returns to haunt me A past which i know not A past hidden in lies Speaks out to me now It tells me of my sins How I made my friends And lost then crying Past floods into present Remember your pain Whispers the night You deserve to remember You will feel the pain Cold hands on my throat Tighten their grip Stealing my breath REMEMBER YOUR SINS< !signature--> Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd [This message has been edited by Walter Poe (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem moves and effects me.It is very well written and has captured the emotions we sometimes dont know how to express. Yet you express them with grace. Janet Marie |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Whew! Makes me afraid to be alone. Nicely done! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Walter another beauty! I'm beginning to think you know something we all don't?  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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