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Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 1999-09-19 02:41 AM

My mind is
reeling
spinning
diving
Into this unknown
yet known realm of
subconscious understanding
Where my realities
are fiction, yet speak
the truths only I know
They lie!
Self was taken away
ripped from my tenuous
grasp
The viscous fluid of
my tattered soul, dripping
off the remains of Truth,
Faith, Love, and
Innocence
As I crawl along
picking up the pieces
of my damaged past
He! He! He!
He did this to me
Took without asking
that which was mine
The pain is
unreal
the guilt
my bittersweet companion
And confusion
abound as I try
to Understand
As They try to
understand
My curious and
peculiar ways
They will never
know the truth
of what happened
Why he did
what he did
And whose right
to take away mine
to choose, to say no
I come close to the
horrid realization
the bloody truth and
reasoning behind his
sheep’s mask
I see a sliver
into the black
heart of the
assailant
Run!
Suddenly, a shake
and a scream
A sweaty gasp
I snap into my
dark reality
Painful breaths
as the pressure
eases off
my throat

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-19 02:45 AM

Profoundly sad and moving piece my dear. You write well enough to chill my bones even. Extremely provocative work with a vile issue at it's heart.
I feel for you my friend, yet I am glad you chose to grace us with this slice of your soul.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

2 posted 1999-09-19 08:18 AM

My tender love, unless pressed with a branding promise, I will hunt this subhuman defiler and bury him, up close and personal, for I want his last image to be of me, Dark Vengeance.
Though the past is dusty, the memories are not, they being shiny and razor sharp. Even if I could take those memories away forever, I would not, for they have served to shape who you are now, the one I love. For you would I traverse the globe to hold, and for your honor I would traverse the globe to restore.

Soon, my soul's desire, if ever like dreams afflict your sleeping moments, you will be able to freely call upon me for coffee and comfort, if I may be so honored to provide such.

Alicat

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-09-19 03:35 PM

This pulled me in fom the first word till the last. Really a profound and sad piece..

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Helewes

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-09-21 07:47 AM

Excellent conveyence of dark emotion, Satiate. Fear, violation, ...great piece.

Michael

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