Dark Poetry #1 |
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What good is Love? |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA ![]() |
What good is love That feels so strong If all your told Is that it’s wrong What good is love Deep in your soul When that love Cannot be told What good is love Kept in a cage It drives you nuts It causes rage What good is love So warm and so true When what you need Is kept from you I do not know the answer to These questions that I’m asking you I only know a love so true Should not be locked away I ask that you Assist me to Find a way To see this through It hurts me so To know your mine Yet that I cannot Have you I’m living now on borrowed time The time that you will give me And if this feeling hurts you I hope that you forgive me I want only to love you The best that I can No hidden moments Just Love |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
I do not know the answer to These questions that I’m asking you I only know a love so true Should not be locked away. u nailed it, man. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks moshpit. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Spike, I have found like yourself that love can be very frustrating if its not shared or mutual. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
James is right I have been there too. For whatever reason it doesn't work out, it's so sad and hurtfilled. Honey (HUGS) for understanding, but don't give up. There are others to love. Your life isn't loveless you know, family, friends, etc you still have some love in your life. As for helping you through this, you don't even have to ask me hon. I'm hear to read your poems or you can email me. I care, and I'm here.. (HUGS) ![]() Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you James and Isis. I wrote this during a very tough time and it has since worked itself out. I liked it because it captured the feeling I had at the time and only the person I wrote it to had ever read it. Thought it might bbe enjoyable to someone who writes or at least likes to read poetry. Rich |
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