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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Some....day...somwhere a man will think himself to madness An awakening will occur of an unfathomed kind High & Low lords will battle, who will recieve Some....day...somwhere lightning will strike a man & earthquakes will shatter his knees Which battle will be won Who will concede Some....day...somwhere time will stop a man's breath A new birth will occur & the shade and sun will free him to the heavens hell indeed Some....day...somwhere an unscriptured man will appear From both shadows and light To bring a new age of insanity and all will be at his plead [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Welcome to Passions, Bojopy. Glad to see you found the "new post" o.k. This is magnificent. Very incisive thought pattern here. Great poem. Michael |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I enjoyed this poem,A little eerie, I'm guessing you are talking about the anti-christ? Welcome to the Forum, Paul |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is a great poem , well done Bojopy , I guess welcome is too late as Ive read many replies from you  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful format and rhyme scheme you got here. Welcome to passions |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very interesting. And I don't mean that in a bad way either, I really did find this most interesting! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, I agree Brandon, it does look better in the Dark Forum. Great verse. Michael |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thanks so much Michael for moving this here. It does belong here. So all what do you think? Kinda creepy lol |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
No creepy a possible reality? Who knows what and if and when it will happen???? Interesting thoughts and I enjoyed it thoroughly Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Once again you leave the reader with such deep thoughts to ponder. Alittle eerie? Yes. Any thoughts on how it all might end is eerie. Great poem. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I thank you for the responses and for listening to the "Unknown Soldier"!!!!! I apologize for quoting the "Doors" but I feel that way somtimes...... alone again as I am........Bojopy < !signature--> "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
welcome to passions,I liked your poem. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I enjoyed this alot. I like the way you lead the reader to the Anti-Christ,but never name him. Excellent indeed < !signature-->Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 01-10-2000).] |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
"My voice is cold, my words solemn Yet remain Full of power, my acheivements outlive me so i am complete" Walter Poe A truth you hold Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I think I should explain myself on this a little. I think, well I hope, there is a coming of a new religion and it will come from a person who will be among us. I think putting God on a pedestal and the devil with so much gloom has tainted all our thoughts of life. I apologize if I affend. Living up to the bible is not possible. And I know that god forgives. But we have to feel so romorse for so long about what we've done and we should not have to do this. If we know it was not right and feel sorry then let one go on. As for the devil we make that out to be just the worse thing in the world and it may be. Anyway I think that there is a happy and I say HAPPY medium in there we should explore. I'm not saying doing bad things are good in any sense but some things society dooms as so bad do not relate to the Bible. I would just like to explore this!!! Anyway what do you think???? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jim Morrison rulz!! There is wisdom in his words. If you care to go back into the dark forum history you would see my Jim works. Hey don't knock yourself for liking his stuff, I have his poetry book and much more. As for your poem interesting, thought provoking, you like to do that don't you? Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
My words or thoughts I think were inspired by some of the Doors music and lyrics. Well maybe how I felt when I was listening to them. I cant say how I felt though not aloud. Did you say you had some Jim works? Where in here and what does that mean? and which book do you have? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I apologize for putting this back up but I just thought about this topic again. I'm not anti-God but I'm anti- bible. Answer me this why is the bible only 2 thousand yrs old and true life is older then what is portrayed. HUH? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hi bojopy, I liked this piece. As far as your question about the age of the bible and the age of life that will be an unsolved dilemma. P.S. I will take that challenge from you. Bring it on, and lets have some fun  [This message has been edited by kitkat (edited 01-14-2000).] |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm sorry for reposting this but this is what I feel tonite again!!!!!! I do not want to make anyone mad with this but just read it with an open mind!! Thank you........Sorry for reposting it passions!! You know what I mean! Please respond with critical thoughts please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bojopy "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
Nice touch. |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
AMAZING BOJOPY...ONCE AGAIN...WELL DONE |
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