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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
You raped my mind... and my opionated ways. You raped my heart... and stole all my love. You raped my soul... and every thought throughout. You raped my laughter... and took the happiness away. You raped my future... and all the dreams I had made. You raped all you could... and then let your bestfriend rape the rest. ~Carman~ |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
This was very disturbing to think about but a great read! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
bojopy...Thank you for responding to my poems. I almost didn't post this...and i'm not sure if I did the right thing. But I that i had to make it public somewhere. And this is where i chose. Carman |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I'm glad you chose to post it here. There are some caring people here that will send out prayers to you if you need them, including myself. I don't know the half of what you have probably gone through, but I am very sorry this happened.  JOY |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
thank you Joy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Carman this is nicely written. I share in the sadness for the misfortune you have experienced and now I am hoping to share in your happiness and a better future for you. Take care of yourself. James |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
It is a horrible world in which these words must be written. And too many people are forced to feel this way. I am deeply sorry that you had to experience this feeling. But thank you for sharing your words with us all. Jannel |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you James... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
we can only heal from this kind of pain and loss... by expressing it and sharing it and then finding strength in knowing others understand.. and can heal from it also. you show both courage and strength in your words and your decision to share it. Take care, Janet Marie |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
carman: this is a beautifully disturbing expression of rape (in its physical or emotional form)... you express your feelings so adeptly and with such passion that i cannot believe you wont be able to create a new and better future for yourself... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This wasn't too graphic if that was what you were worried about. How sad to feel this way. I too wish for a start that word had never been invented. (HUGS) Well expressed  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you Janet Marie...i appreciate your words. Thank you Poetry_Kills...I hope you're right. And..Thank you Isis. Carman |
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