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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
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0 posted 2000-01-22 04:11 AM




Lying upon my back stricken to thy bed
With no lights or darks only shades of color
               and only forever

It cannot be visually written and explained
But upon seeing it; it would seem the same

A mirror could'nt justify what I see
It only lyes in this room of its own seduction
               and its reduction

Its a hallowing of a mood that burns the night
And melts from every fixture into the bright

I see numbers race, erase, and begin to chase
Ideas emancipate, translate, and irratate
         from this uncontious state

As water falls from the walls into thy dampening
I quiver and collect the unresistable body cramping

Excellence is this; as it builds more sights
Its infecting the mind & me the offender
               but it wont remember

Blackness upon black has seemed to appear
And the blackness now is shining in mirror

The far out place is closer then ever before
The night scenes are trading with all others
               just like lovers

I move now only with the opposite sun as it shades
And I can only reach as far as darkness has laid

Who will connect me to the lighted side
To many tunnels want me to run there...why?
               as I sit in sty

An offering, the offering blessed me this time thru
What a world it was; what a world I went too

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
1 posted 2000-01-22 09:31 AM


i think i'd like to go to that world...I don't care much for this one.


Carman

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-22 05:32 PM


My God Bojopy this was Brillance unedited.  I simply adored this.  You did wonderfully. I'll connect you hon if you do the same for me. (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-23 03:28 AM


OH WOW I just reread this and I dont think I was in the right state of mind when I wrote this!!!  Anyway I would love to be in this world with all my passion friends...and I know why...because we are the thinkers of this world....and forgotten!!!!  Wow am I just weird tonite or what?

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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