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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-30 06:54 PM

She lays alone on the queen sized bed,
A single candle lights the room,
Surround by her precious momento's,
Still she feels such gloom.

The house is all asleep,
She lays there awake,
Longing for things she can't have,
Wandering through past memories, her despair she cannot seem to shake.

Reliving past mistakes,
Her inner light dim like the night,
Not wanting to sleep for the nightmares will come,
And she will awaken again in fright.

Longing for realities unrealistic,
Longing for a future she cannot have,
Longing to feel safe and loved,
Longing to be embraced and saved.

The faults aren't hers,
This she knows is true,
But why does it have to be her that suffers?
Why is she the one left to feel blue?

Her blue eyes glisten with tears,
And there is no one to comfort her,
What life is this?
Dreading her life, her sanity, and tomorrow?

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Kari16
New Member

since 1999-12-30

Posts 7
nebraska

1 posted 1999-12-30 09:10 PM

That is a really good poem. I felt the hurt inside of her.. I like reading your poems. Keep um coming.
~Kari~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-30 11:45 PM

Thanks Kari

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 1999-12-31 08:24 AM

Fear not my friend. . . for there is one who will always be there to comfort you. . . weep not for what has been. . . dream of what will be. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-31 05:12 PM

Thanks as always my friend

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

5 posted 1999-12-31 07:07 PM

Whenever I read what you write I feel like you are writing about me.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-12-31 11:23 PM

I believe the answer to your question lie with fear. Heart-wrenching poem, Isis. Can feel the pain in this one.

Michael

medusa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-09

Posts 23

7 posted 2000-01-01 01:01 AM

loved it isis ! her pain is so intense

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

8 posted 2000-01-01 03:15 AM

Why thanks

Niemczak that is a lovely compliment

Michael, lieing with fear I like that

Thanks Medusa

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Andrew
New Member

since 1999-12-20

Posts 9

9 posted 2000-01-01 08:24 AM

Isis,
Maybe some of the feelings of that
poem are based on guilt as well. Sometimes
when we do think of the past and what we have done we do feel guilty of the hurt we gave others. Good poem and do not give up,there is always light at the end of the tunnel.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

10 posted 2000-01-01 05:31 PM

The light of all light is hope, it dims but I never lose it

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2000-01-22 05:18 PM

This is touching Isis.
I hope and pray God will comfort you thru every tear and sorrow
and bless you with a warm and happy tomorrow.
James

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

12 posted 2000-01-23 03:39 AM

Lovely poem
can truely relate
Thanks

Richard

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