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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
I want you to question yourself Contradict your law Open up a wandering soul Rub your beliefs raw Sad stories told the tale Liew blossom from within Locked away in your own perspectives You can never win Take a walk and go backwards Review the past so cold Then look forward without reason And that past you can fold Cherishing the knowledge Blank of what to think Writing words and forming thoughts Have made me all but weak Philosophy amazes me Points of view that loom Minds can all but comprehend The truth that we assume |
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brandywine Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19Illinois |
I really enjoyed reading this peice of work. Very good. Brandy We are each of us angels with only one wing... and the only way we are able to fly.. is by embracing each other. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
very good work... i love the way you start off the piece with a direct challenge to the reader... very stirring... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Grab the readers attention for that is the way to go. Well done  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Very compelling piece here!! I enjoyed this much....bojopy "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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