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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Disdain, Disdain.. You... My bitter tears I embark Thy self to... You... Silly little girl Your anguished crys Were hushed.... By you... And sick in heart... Glee was encouraged.. False hope recognized... By you... Now all is well Tonite lovers...Lust And tonite sins.. perish Though only for a moment... We will see.. Love was intended...I wish to cry... No..Hush little girl... This is the redemption of Man |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i really liked this. it kind of set me back a step. i don't know how to explain it. kind of a quiet or subtle strength to it. anyway, very good! |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Interesting!! I like the style too.. I also agree with danni It was subtle. "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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