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brandywine Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19Illinois |
Darkness...then a sudden splash of light... it lingers only for an instant..then ever so slowly fades away I do not know what it is... I only know that has dared to invade my place of solitude... Darkness...surrounds my every move... inhale....exhale....darkness Yet this unknown presence has my mind and soul mystified I yearn for it to return... to let me learn of it I call upon it.... and although I cannot see this mystery I can feel its breathe upon my neck.... I can sence its heart beat disturbingly close to mine..... Am I feeling at peace... have I changed any due to the boldness of this thing...... I am not comforted.... because when I glance around I am still engulfed in darkness..... |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i enjoyed this very much and can completely relate. nice work! |
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brandywine Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19Illinois |
Thanks Danni..... I am so glad I have found a place where I can express my feelings and emotions.... and people understand and do not look down on me for it. Brandy |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Look down upon you... never here I look up to people when they express themselves... I also can relate to this... I wish I did'nt but it does help me write.. and I see it helps you too.. good piece "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a beautiful, descriptive poem. these kinds of emotions are the hardest to express, but you have done it with grace. Janet Marie |
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