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Dark Poetry #1

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hathor
Junior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-01-20 04:07 PM

Harkening pain
of agony made
throughout my body here
forever known the
pain that caused
the triumph of
deathly war.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-01-21 01:33 AM

Want a title? Pain? How is that? Short but speaks volumes :_

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-01-21 02:25 AM

short and powerful. i can think of many possible meanings. good work.

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-22 02:25 AM

I dont know if you like the "Doors" but I felt like this is somthing Jim Morrison would have said. Well done

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

4 posted 2000-01-23 03:18 PM

Very powerful. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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