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Two-worlds New Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 7 |
If the future was the past Would you still have questions to ask? If yesterday was today Would tomorrow be the same way? If months always repeated Would your life be cheated? If years were reversed Would death go back to the hearst? If the sun went west to east Would you even give in the least? If realities were really dreams Would you know what anything means? If GOD was a devil Would you feel your in trouble? If death meant your finally alive Would you ever even try? If your life was never known Would you have ever known? IF life was never known Would you have known? This is a two parter and I will post it later! Thanks for reading it if you do! Two-worlds |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good questions...would it be better to die the way we are born...being held in loving hands..wrapped in a warm blanket? Welcome to passions! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love reading poetry that is mind provoking and I can actually understand!! I liked this a lot!!! Very well Done!! Hope to see more from you!!!! Take Care Bridgette Welcome to Passions!!! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So many valid questions wrapped up within these verses!! I agree with the question Poet deVine brings up. It would be ethereal and warm to be held in a blanket all soft and warm  Enjoyed this very much. Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I agree with the rest. Valid and thought provoking indeed. Looking forward to more. And I too welcome you. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
What a talent!!!!!! WOW you remind me of ME!!! just kiddin all this was me in a different nic. I could never leave this family of mine!! Welcome back me! (pat on my back for being a man about this) hahahahaha. Thanks all for the emails woooohoooo I am loved!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hey there I liked If GOD was a devil.Makes you think. Welcome back. A waiting part two... |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Well all part two to this is under my other nic Bojopy! It is titled part 2 for Two-worlds. If you respond to it think about the question asked in the begining if you wish. Thanks Bojopy within Two-worlds!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
I loved this poem! Sometimes a writers best and worst dream...is that their poem becomes someone else's poem. Should it be comforting that there is always a part of every poem that speaks true to everyone? *smile* I can't wait for the second half. I enjoyed this very much. It made me think...and I could see myself asking these questions to myself and loved ones. Carman |
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