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Mommy Make the Pain Go Away |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Mommy Hold me now You did not hold me then You encouraged I did not want it But you did You did not help Do I tell you The Problems My Fear Guilt Shame Terror The emptiness Most of all the hurt No one was with me I was alone Without you mommy I was scared Later when I cried You said I was weird So alone I wept And went to sleep I loved her as you say you love me I grieve I cannot forget Impossible to try |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad this, could you explain who the little girl lost? Her sister perhaps? Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
How deeply sad. I believe that some of the best poetry disturbs us and makes us want to act. I wanted to pick up this lost soul and hold them and show them how they should have been loved to begin with. Beautiful and moving. Jannel |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Aw this was so sad. I feel so lucky and somwhat ashamed that I have such great parents. I should not ever feel this way but I do somtimes. "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank you all for your thoughts...I love the way my poetry is soooo open to interpretation!! Well, let me help you a bit!! This is me talking to my mom as an adult but from a childlike standpoint!! She encouraged me to give part of me up!! I hope that helps!! Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, Justbleu, very sad....and very well stated....a real heartbreaker... Sending warm, motherly {{hugs}} your way... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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