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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Folded thoughts tucked away in the mind Searching for 'THE ONE' we all want to find The answers of all....of one's death As this sneaks upon us each & every breath It can't be true nobody can just die They must get another..another try To solve all that may have went wrong And not be forgotten and just be gone Where is this place in all our thought Has one been there; am I going to be brought? Deep within feelings lyes the bitter truth That life is over after deaths uncouth What? Why? as I begin to cry It cant be, that must be a lie Tell us 'YOU' of the life therafter And about all those smiles of our laughter Tell me there true to my lonely heart or have I fallen to hard to ever be apart? Kill me off then to never be lost Im begging please! dont let my soul be tossed! The inner divive is the only thing that can save me Where would and could...... my internal savior be Dream me that little dream of substance Corrupt it enough to fill this abundance And there will lye the aftermath of forever The life............... the life therafter "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Really good piece B. The last verse struck my soul. It was so easy to read and even more to understand. TYou for posting this  Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Simple words for deep complexity!! Thanks JennyLee "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
great read B mortality can be frustrating...that's what I got out of it.This CAN'T be it. There just isn't enough time. Too many questions. I hear what you are screaming friend. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great work here, Bojopy. Very intriguing. Michael |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thank you dreemr and Michael for responding. The mortalities of life so troubling to me! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I so often wonder and think about life and death!!! What it all means!! Who am I!! Where am I going?? Etc. This was a good piece!! Keep writing!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Struck a chord with me too Bojopy. I wish at grade 1 some specialist could come in and say the reason you are on this earth is.. It would make life easier. Sorry I almost missed this one, and glad I didn't. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
your simple ...but deep words touched me... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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