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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Large is the world full of wonder high enshrouded Lost to many Small is the world matchbox thin wonder on in and you may never wander out flat is the world my reflection lives in where music lives where we live in sin Round is the world Full and artistic Painting the picture in words of a mystic Soft is the world Sand in the desert Play in the waves and dolphins majestic Hard is the world of stone and cold Concrete jungle in which i bungle Gone is the world lost now forever I am at peace still icey white pallour < !signature--> Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd [This message has been edited by Walter Poe (edited 01-17-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Interesting Walter but are you saying you are at peace, icy white pallour like the living dead??? Just verify that for me will you? Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
i really like this the ending especially (i think i get it, but i'll wait for your explaination for isis before blundering in with my opinion) good job indeed merely_a_jester |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Its a way of looking at the world and life or more accurately several ways to look at the world The only verse without a 'reflection' is the final one as in every view this only happens once and is universal (enough of a clue?) Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
The lines "wonder on in and you may never wander out" was the wonder and wander intended because that was magnificent!!! This was a thinkers piece...my favorite kind "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
It was intended refers to think to hard and you may never escape If you know what i mean ???!!!??? Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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