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Bojopy's goodbye
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Bojopy's goodbye |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Sinful sins and unforgetable grins I lay to rest..... With what I already knew So tired and for hire for those who wish to will Bloomed and consumed in a nightimes noon Listing;; persisting for the love unlisting All I made to come Is my lonely existing Corrupted;; interrupted situated and jaded And to never come again From nowhere...I'm faded .................. Swollen slowly in the sinking swim Slowly abated from now and to when So into forevers tomorrow & forevers today's I'll make no more remarks and no desirable sparks Learn what it is to be alive and what makes humanity survive As hollowing as one must haze Birth to earth is the final faze There is no revenge in the ends There is no ends with you my friends But upon this way the last forbidden day Will arise a different submise the one (Bojopy); Who where makes so much a disguise Those relentless renders and rightous souls I give no thanks but biblical trolls Remorsful as one may be with trinity they see I only give one more word the spoken word with no advice of suprising suffice There is no revenge in the ends And once again;; and again I lose me and my friends So out I go with no more soul To never submit again....... another submit within.... Goodbye and do not be shamed I am the only who is in vain I wrote not to be known or ever shown But to be heard!!!!!!!!! I wish not to go so let me know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alone I Am Forever Again "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
Ok Bojopy...you're freakin me out man..I hope this piece was nothing more than figurative. I do know how yu feel to becme rooted in a place where the comfort of hearing of others in the same plight as you offers a sense of security and blinds us from actually trying to face reality and intermingle with the world. And how that sometimes we feel the need to just dive into it and join "them" and forget our "security blankets." I don't know if I am anywhere near the mark here, but all I know is I need you here. Maybe I'm overdramatizing all this but I hope you don't plan on leaving the forum. Reading your work and hearing the cries of someone who has the same puzzling and confusing yet so keenly expressed thoughts and feelings as me is one of the main things that drew me here and kept me. Anyway...apologies for the length of this message but felt i had to say this. Forgive me if i read too much into it. dreemr (Kyle) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Bojopy I sent you three emails (well two and a card) you know I care and I'm sorry you've misunderstood our simple forum etiquette. I care about you and I'm upset you want to leave. But you ignored my emails and wrote this. I hope it's not like it looks and your decision is made. I'll write you one more email hon. Please stay. A misunderstanding or pride should not be the master in life. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Wow! Do I feel like I missed something big. What happened to make you want to leave the forum? I for one have come to enjoy your work and mastery of words. I find your style unique and very thought provoking. Both of witch I love and look forward to. I hope that you don't leave for you have been an asset to this place. And if you should choose to leave at least know that you will be missed! |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Bojopy...no need to leave...you are an amazing writer...so so smart...above the level...stay above friend...look at everything at all angles...i need you to..you inspire me...i believe you to be strong... don't walk away now...for other reasons...we need your words...advice....pride..is that what it is...i know you must be above that bojopy...just by your writings...no goodbyes...never...don't cease to amaze anyone for anything...i won't beg you to stay...but i will simply ask you once not to walk away |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Though I don't often reply to your poetry, I've read your work and it's good.....I think you should continue to write and post...don't close your heart..to accepting or giving...  |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
goodbye geeeeees more like hello to my inner insanity!! LOL at me! WOW I feel better all thanks!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was rather interesting...hmm...Actually I liked it a lot  Well, I hope you won't be a leaving us here!! Everybody is different in their own special way and it just wouldn't be the same if you decided not to stay!!!Take Care Bridgette |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
(HUGS)  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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