Dark Poetry #1 |
christopher |
mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
for christopher, you were only here for such a short time, a gift that was treasured dear. then your life was taken away, i hold your memory near. to see the smile upon your face, brought a smile to mine. to see the sunshine everyday, gives me peace of mind. i know you ride the clouds on high, with your precious little wings. forever looking after me, with the angels as they sing. someday we'll be together, to walk the streets of gold. to make up the time we lost, i'll again have you to hold. mo. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Im sorry for the loss .. this was beautiful!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Sincere and deeply beautiful! Blessings, Jenny Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
i haven't experienced the loss of someone very close to me yet. But the feelings and emotions expressed here convey well what it must be like. You have my deepest sympathy. Thank you for sharing. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Heartwrenching, mojar. Beautiful poem, but very sad. My heart to you. Michael |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well a title such as this is sure to guarentee my reply! And a poignant tale you tell well! |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Mo- i too am sorry for your loss. your expression here was beautiful and heartfelt. i too believe that we will be reunited with those we love who went before us. and that they are truly in a better place. it's gotten me through the hardest times. my prayers are with you and yours. may God be with you. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
i would like to thank you all for your heartfelt comments, this loss was not mine directly, a very good friend that lost her nephew to child abuse, but we all feel the loss, again i thank you from my heart. mo |
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