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AZRAEL
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 14

0 posted 2000-01-12 10:27 PM

Just as the brush is to the canvass,
The knife was to my body.

Carving narrow gouges into the mangled,
and missused flesh.
Spilling droplets of life upon the linolium,
Swimming in my very existance.
Screaming muffled cries as it all goes away,
Whining and dying and hating.
Hating my shells existance until a hand grasped me,
A hand of beuty and love.
The hand of one like me, one who also was a canvass,
One who made me feel love.
Now both knives are sheathed forever,and the canvass
,is cleaned of scars and restreached, for life.

If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-01-12 10:29 PM

Azrael, I really liked this and I'm glad you contained the graphicness of it, it's appreciated. Missed you round here my friend

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

AZRAEL
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 14

2 posted 2000-01-12 10:33 PM

I thank ye much dear lady. Yes I did contain and withhold some more graphic details but twas hard to. I have also missed thee and your words, but im back and will stay.

If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-12 10:49 PM

I agree with Isis on this one. What a wonderful way to show this emotion!!!

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

Bathory
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 11
OH.

4 posted 2000-01-13 10:14 PM

My love your talent is queit remarable and I do Adore you as your poetry.Love you forevermore.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 2000-01-14 01:19 PM

A well-deserved read for me, as always Tom!!

Well Done

Jenny Lee

Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist

AZRAEL
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 14

6 posted 2000-01-15 01:07 PM

I thank all ye yet again.Jen thanks glad you enjoyed the read and im glad I produced it.Thank there too dear Im so happy that my poetry means so much to you as do I, for this feeling is mutual.

If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

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