Dark Poetry #1 |
Solace Infinity |
Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Starving for a seductional serenity To be born again....born into infinity To never remember.......or ever forget the end & begining of the internal trip Be alive with no sight of any death But in death still alive with breath And see all that is within & without But never again; have questions of doubt "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
WHOA...this was awesome Bo...cool title too. |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
well done poet...your layering is marvelous! Extreme Kudos! |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thank you dreenr and haze this was a moment in time that will never be forgot!!! |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
i truely enjoyed this piece it had depth and i'm just a sucker for alliteration merely a jester |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thank you merely!!! Where is your submittance to our family let me know????? I will read all the words you submit and give a submise that will astonish all!!! LOL "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I wonder does anyone think about what it would be like to die and come back to life??? I really wonder...hmmmm "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I agree with what has been said already. This is an incredible piece. I have never really thought of coming back to life after death. But, strange as it may be, I wonder what it would be like to for my soul to sick around, as a ghost I suppose, and see how life moves on after I am gone. I don't know if that seems egotistical, but I just wonder sometimes who would really know and care that I have passed on. (besides my immediate family) |
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