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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Beddy-bye in breath In hearts it's conceived In the mind it's alone & forgetfullness it's roamed It turned up a leaf of a new belief Shot down but not in shame Only one thing, just to blame It's not timing or it's dream But it's lonely, lonely lost soul A soul so dismissed A soul in digress but blessed It wishes to devine it's own time but it awaits it's love fate But all alone..... it's eclipsed Waiting for it's sun.... not to miss I'm really not sure what people will think this portrays so respond in what you think???!!! < !signature--> "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gee you don't ask much. What is it about? Well you can read many possibilities into this. Hope? Love? Peace? I'll go for hope and love ok? Probably wrong, but geez gimme a break?! Well done, very thought provoking  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I can't remember what I was writing about here it was a long time ago and I get many different ideas about it! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I think of a soul of a lover being turned away and let down time and time again. Left with only half of itself, the half lacking being the eclipse. Hoping to happen across it's "soulmate" so that it may be complete and able to shine. So, that's my take. And, by the way, I liked this poem. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thanks danni!! what you said seems to fit so well as that is usually how I feel. I've been reading your stuff lately and have enjoyed them. We seem to have some of the same ideas. At least I think so. Anyway thanks "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
ChainedAngel what do you think of this if you read it? Just curious!! ooooppps and ne one else< !signature--> "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm forry I put this on top but I had too. I just want people to respond to this in there thinking demise!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
i like how it progresses; the flow it leaves a little to the imagination, but not enough so as to diminish it's feel enjoyable all around merely a jester |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
thanks merely for the response and kind words! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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