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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
BABY SAID TO NEVER TOUCH... FOR THE TOUCH WOULD SURELY BURN MY HAND WAS A FLAME... HE SCREAMED "YOU'LL NEVER LEARN" HE SWORE WE'D BE MASTERS HE GRABBED ME BY THE HAND NOW IT WAS TIME... TO RULE GEHENNA'S LAND I STOOD WITH A GHOST... THE WORLD IT WAS DYING... I TURNED AROUND FOR COMFORT BUT GOD HIMSELF WAS CRYING A SPECIES NOW IN STANDSTILL OF WHAT FEAR WAS LEFT TO COME A MESSAGE MESSAGE LEFT UNSPOKEN... A MISSION LEFT UNDONE MY MIND SENSING LOSS SADNESS TRACED WITH FURY THE RESULTS OF A MAN OUR ACTIONS NOW OUR JURY WHAT TO BE DONE? WHAT WORDS TO SAY? A BRIO BROKE BY IMAGE SUCH A PRICE TO PAY A FALLACY IN HEAVEN LUCIDITY IN FIRE TO RATIONALIZE THE NOW RESTRICTION ON DESIRE I FALL TO MY KNEES MY SOUL ABOUT TO BREAK THE NEEDING OF ANOTHER HOW MUCH OF THIS TO TAKE AN ANGEL GAVE ME HOPE WHILE WATCHING FROM ABOVE TRUE ESCAPE OF DESPAIR IS ONLY THROUGH TRUE LOVE GOOD AND EVIL NOW WERE MIXED THE FIRE NOW BURNED STRONGER WHO REALLY KNEW.. IT ISN'T FOR MUCH LONGER |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Welcome to passions ARCADIA!!!! What a great first piece to give. I liked the line 'BUT GOD HIMSELF WAS CRYING' !!! and 'GOOD AND EVIL NOW WERE MIXED' !!!! Once again welcome to our family........Bojopy "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I agree, an excellent first posting.  um however... could you turn off the caps? it's a bitch to read like that |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to our Passions family, and I third it, what an excellent first posting!! Bravo and welcome  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Indeed a wonderful first post. And I look forward to more. I also welcome you! |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
"The world and i we hold your hand And all around in words so grand The angels sing to heavens tune Come oh pure, We welcome you." To many more great poems Welcome from walter Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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