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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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I wander through a land of nothingness filled with overflowing emptiness Where visions of dispair embrace the thick damp air. Saddnes dances ever so gently here with rage that grasps lovingly onto fear. Blackness that seeps straight into the ground to swallow the slightest sound of a screaming attempt to shed a tear. This is the land I wander, foggy and unclear, to except, understand, and know the depths of my vociferous soul. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Dark and beautiful expression. I have often wandered through a world much the same. Welcome! look forward to more. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Dark and sad. I like very much! The last three lines pulled it all together for me. Waiting to read more from you  Welcome Jennifer Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I thank you so very much for the welcome and am honored that you liked my words! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark forum. This piece screamed to me, I loved the emotion and darkness. Awaiting more At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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