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Dark Poetry #1

If Only

Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

0 posted 2000-01-06 05:12 PM

If only you kissed me
Like the woman in your dreams
Full of passion and desire
Setting my world of fire

If only you held me
In the strength of your arms
Through the darkest hours of night
Protecting me with with your loving light

If only you loved me
Like the woman before

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 2000-01-06 07:28 PM

I have had these same thoughts.
Lovely and heartbreaking this is.
Well done

Jenny

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-01-07 01:11 AM

My thoughts are the same as Jenny's on this. Well done indeed.

Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

3 posted 2000-01-07 02:51 PM

Thank you, one of these days, I am going to get the courage up and talk to him about this.

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

4 posted 2000-01-07 04:50 PM

I have to agree with Jenny too. This piece was short in words but long if you read between the lines. I enjoyed this.......Bojopy

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