Dark Poetry #1 |
Your Remains |
JustinPain New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 9Madison, WI, USA |
All that remains is the frigid wind, That once blew across your blushed face When we frolicked beyond the hills in the winter seasons. And the wind was our symphony. All that remains is the warm sun, That once illuminated your caring face When we dined in afternoon bliss beside the ocean's waves. And the sun was our guardian. All that remains are the leaves, That once fell upon your angelic face When we leaped into the pile on our lawn by our picturesque house. And the leaves were our bed. All that remains is my heart, That once beat for your innocent face When we met in our dreams and vowed to never part. And my heart is still yours. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Justin At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I really enjoyed this poem..thank you bojopy |
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JustinPain New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 9Madison, WI, USA |
Thank you very much Isis and Bojopy. Now, on to the explaination...This was a poem to my lifemate, the one I'll love and marry and cherish for all eternity. I've not met her yet, but choose to wait patiently rather than rush from meaningless relationship to the next in a desperate search for true love. Instead, I quietly await our meeting. Again, thank you all for the replies. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
So wonderfully romantic! And your explanation made it all the more romantic. I wish I would have known alot sooner to dispense of the meaningless relationships and would've waited paitiently. It was a lesson hard learned for me. Sorry for th rambling. This just struck a chorde i guess. A wonderful poem! |
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JustinPain New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 9Madison, WI, USA |
What I've avoided of lost love, I've experienced through my friends when I pick up the peices after they fail in their search for love. Always, I hear the same things. "I thought it was forever...I never saw it coming...I gave up my innocence for this person and now I have nothing left..." To most people I say that I remain innocent because I wish for a life-commitment, but to my closest friends I admit that I keep this innocence for her. It matters not if she is unable to say the same, only that I can tell her, "This I cherished and saved for you." I hold onto my belief that we will know one another at first sight, and our love will survive all of our lives, and deaths as well. [This message has been edited by JustinPain (edited 01-05-2000).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Enjoyed this very much ! Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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