Dark Poetry #1 |
For Kristi |
AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
"SHARED ETERNAL GIFT" No matter how lost or how trapped we were that night, I wanted to remain in thine arms forever. Twas a night of ecstacy, and pleasure Which ultimately had a closure. Shared was; past, present, and future, Shared, forever, our lives. Death hath no hold and shall take, no hold long as I have thee. Shared forever eternity, Shared forevermore our lives. |
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Bathory Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 11OH. |
Tom I never thought I could find the one I have been looking for all my life.I have been happy for the first time I can ever rember when I found you.For I shall always love you more than words can tell. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Azrael and welcome back At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love your Shared Eternal Gift Tom! Beautiful. I love this style you've used too So glad to be able to read your heart again.Happy that you are blessed with love! Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
That was wonderful. |
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AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
Thank ye all tis good to be back yet again. And thanks especially go to you Kristi-LOVE YOU- If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
What emotion I see and feel in this great work. I guess welcome back!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ventures darquely into passion... |
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AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
To all those who may not know I used to be called suicidal dreams in here so if you like check out my past works. If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die. |
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