Dark Poetry #1 |
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For Kristi |
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AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
"SHARED ETERNAL GIFT" No matter how lost or how trapped we were that night, I wanted to remain in thine arms forever. Twas a night of ecstacy, and pleasure Which ultimately had a closure. Shared was; past, present, and future, Shared, forever, our lives. Death hath no hold and shall take, no hold long as I have thee. Shared forever eternity, Shared forevermore our lives. |
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Bathory Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 11OH. |
Tom I never thought I could find the one I have been looking for all my life.I have been happy for the first time I can ever rember when I found you.For I shall always love you more than words can tell. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Azrael and welcome back ![]() At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love your Shared Eternal Gift Tom! Beautiful. I love this style you've used too ![]() Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
That was wonderful. |
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AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
Thank ye all tis good to be back yet again. And thanks especially go to you Kristi-LOVE YOU- If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
What emotion I see and feel in this great work. I guess welcome back!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ventures darquely into passion... |
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AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
To all those who may not know I used to be called suicidal dreams in here so if you like check out my past works. If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die. |
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