navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » This Feeling
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic This Feeling Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
~darkangel~
New Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-01-02 05:11 PM




This pain inside
Can’t escape
I feel betrayed
Will this feeling subside?

I can’t love no one like I once loved you
I can’t explain this feeling.
Is this feeling a sign that I must go without your love?
I know I must do something to ease this feeling of emptiness.

I know there is no greater love like yours
But I know I can survive the day without you there to love me.
And I live the day like no other.
I will keep my faith in me and in you, that one day we will find true love again.



© Copyright 2000 ~darkangel~ - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-02 06:18 PM


This is sad.  You can hope you'll get together again, but hopefully you'll find love in the meantime.....

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 2000-01-04 09:06 AM


Most forlorn and excellent!
Says volumes!!

Jenny


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-01-04 02:56 PM


Look within yourself. . . the answers lie there. . .

Wonderful words, my friend. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » This Feeling

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary