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Kari16 New Member
since 1999-12-30
Posts 7nebraska |
Stephanie by Kari Schmit like the sun in the sky she shined like no other enjoying life as time grew older and older like the wind flowing through the trees her long brown hair flows past her shoulders soft brown eyes that can look through you and heal your pain like the water in the sea that she so dearly loved it took away her life so young and yet so precious like the earth which she lays in peacefully she is one with mother nature who will take care of her forever |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh so sad, yet poetically beautiful  At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kari its wonderful how you compared Stephanie's enjoyment with life with the brightness of the sun to show how "she shined like no other" and the way she loved the sea and lost her life to the sea. Really a heartfelt and a beautiful poem which shows much love and caring and admiration for your friend. James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kari, I was very touched by this lovely poem. What a beautiful tribute to your friend. Thank you for sharing it with us. Take Care Janet Marie ..."She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it." Matchbox20 |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice poem You have truely done your friends memory well. Richard |
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Amy J. Renz Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26Newark, NJ, USA |
Oh Kari, what a beautiful tribute to someone you obviously loved. This is a wonderful piece, and I know how you feel. Thankyou for the priveledge of reading your work, I hope to see more soon. I am an acquired taste, I'm anchovies. Not everyone likes those hairy little things. Tori Amos |
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