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Misty Myth of "love"

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-12-26 06:07 PM

Sometimes there is a breakthrough
Like spring time, a begining.
A breath of new
Like birds of beauty singing.

Meeting her there
So soft, without care.
Beauty so strong, I couldn't bare
But you didn't play fair.

I was controlled
By a false warmth.
I played a hand, and didn't fold.
Now, I am left cold.

You promised me time
I promised you a call.
You & your number didn't rhyme.
Then I was happy, now I fall.

Bitten again by failure.
Will I ever succeed?
My heart and mind you did lure,
On my attention you did feed.

Now I remember
My promise to myself.
Trust no one, please remember.
Trust no one, not even myself.

Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall==

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-26 11:27 PM

Aaw this is sad, you will succeed eventually, you are not a failure, look how you write. ((HUGS)) Now smile for me

Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

2 posted 1999-12-26 11:29 PM

Truth in words. I can relate very well.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 2000-01-02 04:50 PM

This may be sad, but is so vivid in it's truth. I love reading your work

Jenny

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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