Dark Poetry #1 |
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Love Hurts |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
**this is an old one but i thought it fit very well with what i'm feeling** One One lonely One lonely tear One lonely tear drop One lonely tear drop falling One lonely tear drop falling because One lonely tear drop falling because love One lonely tear drop falling because love hurts. **sorry if it suxed, someone told me i should post it...** "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad you did Starboards, and I hope you feel better for it ![]() What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks isis! once again there for me! thanks big sis! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Very good starboards!! If you need to talk. . . I'm here for you too. . . I think that Isis has hit the nail on the head. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks sven...i might just take you up on that offer! I'm so glad there are those out there that care! Thanks again! Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nothing to apologize for...doesn't suck at all. When you're feeling that way it's like an endless series of thought, one adding on to the end of the other, your poem serves to show how averything can seem to move so slow and drawn out when hurt by love. Good job. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks michael, yes...it does seem like it's drawn out... Ashley "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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