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starboards
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longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-12-22 12:41 PM


**this is an old one but i thought it fit very well with what i'm feeling**

One
One lonely
One lonely tear
One lonely tear drop
One lonely tear drop falling
One lonely tear drop falling because
One lonely tear drop falling because love
One lonely tear drop falling because love hurts.

**sorry if it suxed, someone told me i should post it...**


 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 1999-12-22 01:16 AM


Glad you did Starboards, and I hope you feel better for it  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
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2 posted 1999-12-22 01:32 AM


thanks isis! once again there for me! thanks big sis!

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Sven
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3 posted 1999-12-22 08:29 AM


Very good starboards!!

If you need to talk. . . I'm here for you too. . .

I think that Isis has hit the nail on the head. . .



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



starboards
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4 posted 1999-12-22 09:27 AM


Thanks sven...i might just take you up on that offer! I'm so glad there are those out there that care! Thanks again!

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Michael
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5 posted 1999-12-22 02:10 PM


Nothing to apologize for...doesn't suck at all.  When you're feeling that way it's like an endless series of thought, one adding on to the end of the other, your poem serves to show how averything can seem to move so slow and drawn out when hurt by love.  Good job.

Michael

starboards
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6 posted 1999-12-22 02:54 PM


thanks michael, yes...it does seem like it's drawn out...

Ashley

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

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