Dark Poetry #1 |
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Hard to find a true heart... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
It's hard to trust these days It's hard to know true heart It's difficult to see cruelity Throughout Throughout Maybe I'm not getting it Is there a reason burried deeper than I can dig? A reason that makes it a-okay To tear a soul Apart? Apart? It's hard to see the good If it is burried so far down I don't have the time to find it, or the patience. Hatred close to home Makes it hard for me to look To find the true heart waiting Beating under mounds of loathing, immane dirt. JOY |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
You expressed your feelings well in this poem joy...it's never okay to tear a soul...great job! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent words Joy, turst is so hard to come by, but there are some of us who are open and caring. . . but sometimes, you have to tear the soul apart to see what lies underneath. . . and sometimes, it's worth it. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Great job describing exactly what I'm thinking now these past few days. Never did I find a true heart. But I hope that you do ![]() --A Little Fairy-- |
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