Dark Poetry #1 |
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Nous Somme Peut |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Ragged haggard wanderer, Why do you run so quickly To someplace you've never been? Can what's behind you be so bad? Life is but an illusion But the evil is so real Tu et je, nous sommes peut So, so small Lie to live Live to deter death Indefatigable et grand, est le mort. It makes me wonder Is the struggle really worth it? Nothing to do but die On an open road Or in a cage La ou, il n'importe. No love lost Death is the only winner Yet, you fight to live feeble man Fight on Till the end DB |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your words have been missed in this forum, D.B. Glad to see you post here again. "Nothing to do but die On an open road Or in a cage So, true...we all end up in the same place, but I like to think how we handle the fight up till then matters somewhat. ![]() Good poem. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I agree with Michael Deep Blue welcome back or even better welcome home ![]() What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Yes, welcome home! "Death is the only winner"--great line, though chilling to a degree...interesting poem, I'm liken it... ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
I cheat when I have too. I plan on givin death a run. Welcome Home -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Good One David. I really like..Can what's behind you be so bad? Excellent ![]() Jennifer Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Sorry for being so sketchy in my postings of late. Work is eating me alive, but there's a light at the end of the tunnel. I hope it's not Amtrak. DB |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
Really nicely written, i love french, its my dad's mother tongue so i have a great appreciation for what it can deliver for interpretation. Great. The work itself is amazing, and so truthful "Indefatigable et grand, est le mort" Beautiful. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful DB...glad to see you here again. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
DB-- Im some what new to the site and by far this one made me think the most!!! Death is the only winner and Nothing to do but die are so true...... I personally must fight though as for that is all I know to do or been taught to do!! Thinking words thank you.......Bojopy< !signature--> [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-05-2000).] |
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