Dark Poetry #1 |
Moments |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Moments of strength, Moments of weakness, Moments of joy, Moments of weepiness. So many emotional moments, Many different moments lived, Look back on your life, Which has visited you the most? You try so hard to be brave and true, To fill your life with purposeful moments, Then some seemingly innocent little thing, Changes course and moments. The fight is hard, We all weaken 'tis true, Thought I'd found a light, Thought I'd found it in you. But as usual the light blinked, Twas shining for someone else, Now all I have is moments, Spent longing for you. What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful Moments Isis.... Verse four says alot for me..... Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Jen, that is the verse for me too What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
To look back on the moments that I have lived, I would have to say the weeping moments are the ones that come visiting all too often. I share the hurt and disappointment portrayed in this piece Isis. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- great poem! Moments are all we have sometimes, but they can be better than the real thing... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Isis. . . Moments make up a life. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Why thanks everyone What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful work, Isis, Sometimes we only see what we want to see, and the opening of eyes to the truth can be dreadful. Good job. Michael |
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