Dark Poetry #1 |
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This Mask |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
I wore this mask for you The one that you picked out for me I would never have worn it if I knew That I would be hiding myself for none to see. For you I wore this mask Thinking that it was what you wanted I put it right on, I didn't even ask If it would leave me feeling haunted. Haunted by the decisions I made, the things I gave up The things that make me who I am The decision that made me drink from this cup And put up this wall, this dam. I'll wear this mask no more I have worn it for far too long I'll be the person I was before This mask will not stifle my song.< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Good for you Sven, me I retreat behind mine today..... This was true expression ![]() What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Love this piece Sven, it has an unescapable and haunting quality..drug me right into it ![]() Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I loved this! I think we have all made that mistake. But maybe in the end, it has helped us to figure out who we really are, ya think? |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Sven-- I love reading your writings because they are so true to life...keep posting... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . Starboards, thank you for saying that my writings are true to life. . . I try to give them that quality. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
Very good Every thing Dies |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Nicely done and an important lesson learned. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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