Dark Poetry #1 |
This Mask |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wore this mask for you The one that you picked out for me I would never have worn it if I knew That I would be hiding myself for none to see. For you I wore this mask Thinking that it was what you wanted I put it right on, I didn't even ask If it would leave me feeling haunted. Haunted by the decisions I made, the things I gave up The things that make me who I am The decision that made me drink from this cup And put up this wall, this dam. I'll wear this mask no more I have worn it for far too long I'll be the person I was before This mask will not stifle my song.< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Good for you Sven, me I retreat behind mine today..... This was true expression What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Love this piece Sven, it has an unescapable and haunting quality..drug me right into it Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I loved this! I think we have all made that mistake. But maybe in the end, it has helped us to figure out who we really are, ya think? |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Sven-- I love reading your writings because they are so true to life...keep posting... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . Starboards, thank you for saying that my writings are true to life. . . I try to give them that quality. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
Very good Every thing Dies |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Nicely done and an important lesson learned. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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