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wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-12-15 01:56 PM

Darkness engulfs my rancid dreams
While putrid and vile thoughts
Escape my endless day dreams.
Confused by reality and sleep
They both intertwine
With identical annoyance.

I cannot escape through
Bars which I have errected.
Time drags on inside my cell.
Energy is spent,
Motivation forgot.
With no one to give me reason.

No reason to trust
No reason to not
Therefore I am confused
With no where to go,
Not even a place to hide
For I am always here
Reminding myself of my past.

Will this erruption
Of sickness for everything
Subside for thoughts
In which I barely remember?
Or, shall I loose,
Both life and death compleatly
Sucking me in.

Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall==

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

1 posted 1999-12-15 02:52 PM

I could relate to this poem. No motivation, no trust, no where to hide.

JOY

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-12-15 02:57 PM

This was a great read. I could connect with all of it. The fourth stanza hit me the hardest. It is a feeling that haunts me constantly.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-12-15 06:01 PM

This eruption like others will pass,.... then your world will fill anew, this time with love and happines

We gotta hope!

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-12-15 07:11 PM

Wow Wolfie....awesome words here...
I like very much....
Fantastic read

Jenny

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

5 posted 1999-12-21 06:39 PM

Thank you for your replies. I guess that sometimes, it takes time to get enough ambition to even worry about what you forgot was wrong.

Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall==

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

6 posted 1999-12-21 10:54 PM

I too can relate to this poem...no where to go, no one to turn to...great poem!

Starboards

"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

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