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Look and see what you've done!
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Look and see what you've done! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Look and really see for once, All that you have done, The hate filled world you've created, We can't even see the sun. You have to hurt others, It's a need for you now, Don't want any happiness, It's something you won't allow. Breathe in deeply, what do you smell? The putrid scent of hatred, Is this how you want it to be? Is this how our lives are fated? House of love so dreary now, No matter how I try to clean it, It's unloved like it's mistress somehow, No longer a refuge but a prison unit. So, are you happy you spawn from hell? Thrilled with my lack of delight? You embrace the dark world alone now, For I will not partake in your plight. The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Wow Isis. I can really feel that anger in this one. Especially at the end. I love the "spawn from hell" thing. It makes me think of someone I know.  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Danni, was pretty ornery when I wrote it!! What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Medevil blue New Member
since 1999-12-12
Posts 4 |
I have to agree with Danni on this one, its filled anger and resentment don't you think?. I like poems filled with wrath, it's something fresh. --------------------------------------------- From the mud to the stars -To kill a Mockingbird |
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Medevil blue New Member
since 1999-12-12
Posts 4 |
Really loved this one It has a fresh approach to anger and resentment Good one! --------------------------------------------- From the mud to the stars -To kill a Mockingbird |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Why thankyou Medevil Blue and welcome to the Dark Forum What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful Isis. . . very powerful. . . I can really feel the anger that you hold within yourself. . . you express it well, if only others could express their anger in this way. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
I truly loved the way you expressed anger and hatred in this heartfelt and ingenious piece of work dear lady If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Maybe you should be ornery more often if the results...produce this  Jenny |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Good for you my sister! You don't let him drag you down into his game. Bravo! Bravo!! |
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