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When days were intense...
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When days were intense... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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There is always something floating past, when every hour is an open window and there is always you for the passing of clouds and morning song. The birds would sing of comfort in another place but here, only wake me from being somewhere else. And this is I tangled in sheets and I don't know what I feel anymore Oh it was easy when days were intense knowing emotions by their touch upon brain from the waking of eyes 'til close and I grieve for it |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Just wanted to say, sorry i havent been around to reply, i've been reading you all briefly, but i have important college deadlines looming....so, see you after them, which is monday. woo hoo! xxx |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really good poem, gemjop! Don't feel bad, I'm kind of here and there, too. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"The birds would sing of comfort in another place but here, only wake me from being somewhere else." Very cool write Gem. I've been considering a similar thought lately. The intensity is addicting, the rush like no other...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely smashing Gem  Maree  What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A nice poem...good luck with your college work... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma  a good poem, as always. That's okay about not being here so much...I'm not either as much as I used to be. Hope you do good on your exams.  With hugs and love, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
do you know how close to home this is? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The birds would sing of comfort in another place but here, only wake me from being somewhere else." I realize Duncan stole my favorite lines.. but they deserve more attention...I was blown away by those lines...the kind you have to read a few times to let the meaning sink in...outstanding Gemma!! And good luck with your finals!!!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Hey Gemmalimmadingdong, don't feel bad about educating yourself! This poem is so true, and so good. You always leave me waiting for more. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
True..you do leave us wanting more. Best of luck on those exams... good to read you today...you're a Gem! Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"And this is I tangled in sheets and I don't know what I feel anymore Oh it was easy when days were intense knowing emotions by their touch upon brain" yes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
cool poem gem |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
every line touches, every line is felt... thank you, M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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