Open Poetry #32 |
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I cant do that anymore |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho ![]() |
I lay here next to you, in the same bed Yet we're miles apart, so far away I'm thinking of what we've shared, yet you don't care I've lived my life for you, given all I could Yet it doesn't seem like it's enough I'm trying to reach out, but all we do is fight and shout I can't live like this, all alone, even when your there Yet I'm not strong enough to walk away I'm in love with you, even when you hurt me I'm going crazy from the silence Yet I can't seem to break the walls down I've tried all I can, done what I can, I can't do anymore Scared and alone Lost and miserable Hurt and abandoned Abused and torn Desolate and miserable My heart aches, it's torn in two I need you to be there for me But your not here for me My tears fall, hidden from all I want to feel your arms holding me But you don't touch me anymore I love you baby, But I can't live like this Anymore Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Destiny...this is painful...I know, I've been there Welcome to Passions. I hope you find healing and comfort here. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Destiny, this is a beautiful poem......sad, yet beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work. And, welcome back to Passions. ![]() Hugs, ![]() Ethel |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
THank you both for your feed back, i'm happy to say though that things between me and my husband have been worked out..that was a poem i wrote when he and split up for a time being Destiny Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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Lost Awhile Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 17UK |
Speechless! I know exactly how you felt, except being the man I am on the other side. I am so pleased that things have worked out for you. It gives me a litle hope. xx |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
DFA, I have been in your shoes before and I know that it's a painful trip. I'm happy to hear that this is in the past. Our life's changes are what brings about emotions that sometimes we don't know how to deal with and it's fortunate that we are able to express them on paper to help releive ourselves of the pain and in the process...help another. That's where poets come from. Keep writing...from the heart. quatro |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP! Your poem brought back memories. I'll be watching for more. Best of luck. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Glad to hear things have turned around for you. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Who would want to...James |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
Thank you all for your feed back i appreciate it... Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
![]() A painful write, its good to know that things have worked out for you ![]() (check your email for a special PIP greeting) |
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