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Beyond the Senses
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Beyond the Senses |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Emblem by ownership Untainted by consciousness. Dramatizes a mind detaining Climactic epiphany constitutes Decisive 3 D-stage...imaginative process Structures contemplation & feeling Dresses a dual perspective engaging Inter-city commuting with day's fading light Draws us into a fairylike realm of twilight Understanding our welcomed companion Recognition spiritual...robustly communing. Prudence inherits compassionate solace I am lost in this city Mutual affection prepares us for elated renovations Self-affirmation…greetings, intellectual Blessings budding in a white tinted golden rose Progression, intense occurrence, visions creative Carry me down a paved lifelike transformation 'I wandered,' within the breeze of artistic spirit While it caresses and visits human tenderness, the core waiting patient Interlacing, theatrical and prosaic. Pivoting motifs on the 'weekend away' Having this is in itself some strange permission Transforming ability to exhilarating joy The emblem is the blossom, and the bosom of earth Resonates with more than a romantic sense Passions spread thick... An intimate sentinel, through paths unseen Themes rapport, redefining elements of ancient history Embodying a transitional stage in development Metaphysical arrangements... Potentiality, the artistic rite of passage Metaphoric parallel…Swings open, tier by tier Blossoms blown like souls flying on air To an endless chasm beyond the senses life's eternal sphere....we are |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What beautiful poetry you do write. The last stanza in its self is a work of pure art. The entire read is beyond words. Very, very nice Lee J. Please remember me when you become a famous millionaire writer. I’ll wash your car and do your yard work for you! HeeHee! JL  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, I agree. You are truly a gifted writer, Lee J.! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"Potentiality, the artistic rite of passage Metaphoric parallel…Swings open, tier by tier Blossoms blown like souls flying on air To an endless chasm beyond the senses life's eternal sphere....we are" Although difficult to pinpoint the one striking chord, I loved these lines and could not leave without them. TD |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
'I wandered,' within the breeze of artistic spirit While it caresses and visits human tenderness, the core waiting patient Interlacing, theatrical and prosaic. Pivoting motifs on the 'weekend away' Wonderful write Lee. Enjoyed. Chris |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
excellent, yes you are truly talented |
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