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No Time for Me
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No Time for Me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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No Time for Me There, I see it plain as day, that is if this was not such a misty one. Learning that there is no time for me whether to reminisce in the deep of eyes or to hear the sounds of breathing, though faint, even when near. No hello from lips, nor words that could melt the air into droplets of feel, only the waiting that passes into the night spelling the goodbye in shadows on the wall. Days, weeks, minutes or seconds the difference no longer matters. They all pass just the same. My world echoes the emptiness, the wine burning in the solitude of the night. I've put my smile to sleep and let the missing sing to my heart all the old tunes that bring forth illusional beliefs, allowing the empty to quilt me in the warmth of tomorrow's promise. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I've put my smile to sleep and let the missing sing to my heart all the old tunes that bring forth illusional beliefs, allowing the empty to quilt me in the warmth of tomorrow's promise." Such a melancholy write dear Maureen.. but, I understand where you're coming from. And, tomorrow is another day. ~Warm hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
allow no clouds to obscure such beauty, 'tis your heart's duty to let play a while even though for now, loneliness may sing beg you, set free your glorious smile... Touching write, Maureen. ~Tier |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I've put my smile to sleep and let the missing sing to my heart all the old tunes that bring forth illusional beliefs I'd give anything to be able to come up with lines like that...amazing!  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
so wonderfully well written - poignancy drips from the page - has a strong melancholy flavor - powerful emotions - Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nancy, *s thank you for the hugs... time seems to slip away, never enough for what is needed to be done Tiersdin, thank you for the thoughtful words...though,no time for play right now M Balladeer, you always come up with wonderful lines..this was probably a fluke on my part  thank you  M Goodknight, Thank you for stopping to respond. I appreciate it  Dixie...yes we all know, don't we M |
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