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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Scintilla of word Alighting a remembrance As senses careen Scintillating wit Karmic in measure of time Persuades reaction Sundog halos reign Incandescent buoyancy Circling with passion Fetter not the light But praise this scintillation All who would love life ~*~ Revised from a little while back. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I would love to be able to write just one of these. You are a master of the form. I particularly liked verse 3 Very beautiful all the way through Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If only everyone who loves life could read this Karilea.. the smiles would light the world. Beautiful beautiful!! Hugs~
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'fetter not the light' - the words are as gorgeous as the picture. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful series of Haiku Karilea, one cascading into the other so perfectly. Maree  What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin. Go Alanis! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Scintilla of word Alighting a remembrance As senses careen Scintillating wit Karmic in measure of time Persuades reaction" Could feel the sea spray teasing...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Very pleasing to read and feel outloud and inside!  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is beautiful..... pleasant to the eye, the mind and the heart.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karilea You never cease to amaze me with your way with words. The picture was absolutely stunning. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I knew this would be beautiful before I even clicked... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your very words are sources of light and I felt this touch. So beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Scintillating picture and serene words.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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