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The Vault |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
I take the key to all my pain and lock it in the vault Hoping it will somehow hide that this was all my fault But I cannot escape my guilt, the key won’t disappear It whispers deep within the vault, the message loud and clear: “Open up your eyes, girl, please wipe away these streams You can not forget him; he will suffocate your dreams” But in my desperation I begin to runaway Hoping that each step I take will bury yesterday But as I run from all these things, the key, the vault, and you I’m only rediscovering; I’ve brought you with me, too. [This message has been edited by Annie Shadow (05-04-2004 11:59 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Annie, very good...seems like something I would write. I understand this well. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Annie Shadow, This powerful stuff! I hope in facing these lines of poetry, the things you have been running from are now beginning to become surmountable: - 'But as I run from all these things, the key, the vault, and you I’m only rediscovering; I’ve brought you with me, too.' Best wishes! Jon |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Annie...very good write here... and we can't run away no matter how hard we may try. Best of luck to you....Hugs.
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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